It must have been a Dream

country love song again

 

It must have been a Dream

I was floating out in space

on a pillow of soft white clouds

a golden light shown on my face

above the hoard of cheering crowds

trumpets were sounding everywhere

music that I had never heard before

I could feel touch from out of nowhere

the people clapped and let out a thoundrous roar

Oh, I know it must have been a dream

cause you were there along side of me

this was what I've wanted all along

I did not want to wake up from this dream

we've been neighbors but never ever lovers

you always been just my friend

playin peek-a-boo underneath the covers

I never wanted those days to end

all thru high school we hung around

sometimes we even double dated

talking about our dreams layin on the ground

wrestling around joked about things we hated

Oh, I know it must have been a dream

cause we were there sharing kisses

saying words like baby I love you

I did not want to wake up from this dream

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Albatross]

I really liked this one. It flowed through and through smoothly, captivating the feelings you were trying to express perfectly with your words. I noticed one spelling mistake, in the second to last stanza, where you spelled "thru" instead of "through."
What a difficult situation to be in, to be friends with someone like that, and not having the ability to tell them what you really feel about them. All you can do is dream about it..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A beautiful dream.
I don't have these kind of dreams mine all always odd..
This one is beautiful.
Written well..

Peace
Chloe

[Ruth]

Dreams are the best at times aren't they? lol
Hugs to you love
xx

[?]

I like this part the best

Oh, I know it must have been a dream
cause you were there along side of me
this was what I've wanted all along
I did not want to wake up from this dream

I think I can relate a lil to this part

[deeps]

Amazing write and awesome flow.

[Dupree]

It's beautiful. It reminds me of the guy i used to live beside. I fell for hm and never even had him. We all have that one person we fell for and loved that got away. Yet again my friend you wrote a wonderful piece

[?]

Wow what a wonderful dream
We all have dreams that we wish would come true
Great song