Charges - Negative or Positive

relationships are the atoms of love

 

Charges " Negative or Positive

The choices are plain and simple

like the site of a red swollen pimple

you can choose to take a negative charge

and just sit and watch that baby enlarge

on the other hand you surely can choose

to take a positive charge and find the sun

it's not necessary to continuously lose

bring your best smile and offer it to someone

you are sitting here inside of my mind

I'm searching for the right words to say

things just seem to get harder everyday

I don't want to seem uncaring or unkind

so hook your heart up to a particle beam

I'm hoping you will chose a positron

the eyes that glow really turn me on

they curl my collar and make me steam

your voice in my ear I get like a drunken sailor

I can feel the charge believe me it is positive

you quicken my pulse even more Swift than Taylor

these are the things that make me want to live

so the circle goes round makes me so merry

sweet are your lips like a chocolate strawberry

the world is so perfect though we don't seem to know

any charge at all can make a positive glow

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

I dug the clever "Swift than Taylor." Upbeat write GLP!

[JB Murray]

Lol... from an almost juvenille banter to a relatively poignant message... great write!

[just is]

This is wonderful I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow. Enjoyable read.

[Coyote Poetry]

"you quicken my pulse even more Swift then Taylor"
Your poetry always test my mind. I like this poem. Took me to many places. I believe better to be positive. Negative leaves disappointment. I know in the end. All things will break even. So many great lines in this poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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Wow,
I for one am gonna try to be a more positive person, although I know it will be hard with what I have to deal with right now. But am going to try.
Yes postive it more better than negative.
Good poem and message Mr Gomer LePoet