The Love you Make

Give and Take

 

The Love You Make

are you going to be in my dreams tonite

or is this the end of my Abbey Road

don't know why but these 4 lads have come to light

maybe they have come to ease my load

going back to my future looking for my past

did I really think this dream would linger

anything that was so beautiful surely would not last

the hornet has stung and left his burning stinger

the flowers have bloomed now the season is over

the fragrance slowly drifting away from my sense

the times we frolicked in the hay and clover

now looking over my shoulder as I climb the fence

wish I could be in more of a positve mind

but the baggage is getting to be a bit to much

no tricks left inside my magic hat can I find

I so terribly miss that special touch

I know what they said was true and right

about the love you give the love you make

but I am waiting for the sun to end this night

I selfishly wish I had more love that I could take

Gomer LePoet....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great poetry. You leave me always with question and new visions. Love is the easiest thing to give. But fear allow us to keep it stored away. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[?]

hmmm
The love you make
The love you take
The love you make is what you take
and carry in your hearts
Great rhyming and flow Gomer
Your on a role tonight
lol

[Devons]

A tenderly-expressed poem, and an honest one that we can all relate to, I think. A really nice, natural kind of unpretentious rhyme and rhythm. And the final verse is lovely in all aspects. You probably know I'm not one for love poems, on the whole, but this is a nice one, and humanly philosophical.