Mirror Mirror

the only muslces are in your head

 

Mirror Mirror

Hey you there, yes you, do you have a minute

I'd like to talk to you if you can spare some time

I have this situation I need to seriously discuss

it's about my true friend, I think I am commiting a crime

hey, don't point that finger at me you a*s

you are not guilt free buddy boy

and knock that smirk off that face before I do

you act like you bring nothing but joy

I mean you were that one that told her

yes you were the one that told her I love you

I know you think that is all you need to say

but what can you offer other than words you fool

you better come up with a much better plan

one that makes much more sense than that

another one who has the right has already asked

and all you do is offer her words, words in a chat

oh I don't have any doubt that you sincerily care

but your selfish ways have created a royal mess

do you think you can stand tall and display a pair

can you just back away, believe she won't think less

I think it is now perfectly clear your reasons for joy

you love her because she has expressed her love too

and you find that so dam hard to just let go

but we both know it's the only right thing to do

so Mirror Mirror on the wall reflecting that sad sad face

can you find the will to prove that you really care

you would think that between the two of you

one would find the courage, I double dare

 

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

I love this amazing peice.. Awesome!!

[cfix]

Wow this is really amazing, I love this one Gomer.
Very poetic and wonderful.

[Ruth]

Gomer, love, this is one of your best! lol
It takes a lot to find that courage, sometimes a dare is needed! The reflection often turns away and is a coward!
Brilliant work, LOVE it xx

[?]

wow, yes they say if you love someone then let them go. I wonder if whom ever made that lil phrase up ever had to do that, ever knew how hard that was to do?
If they did they wouldnt have said it.
Either way right is right and wrong is wrong. I can relate with you on this one Gomer. Love the creativity and the wording.
Great poem
Thanks for sharing it with me.

[anonymous]

okay. You can rhyme things. nice. I get the feeling you are trying to convey, but really, it comes across as annoying. The font is very distracting and the forced bits at the beginning made me not even finish the read. I like the idea, but I think something like this needs to be performed. I just lose sooo much when I have to read this to myself.... Just a thought. Nice use of words and definitely you have talent as a writer. This particular style just is not my cup of Mt. Dew.