Seperation Point

One more time

 

Seperation Point

as I slam down another frosty one or two

trying to forget trying not to think about you

it's like the old Carly Simon song you're so vain

of course its about him you just said so very plain

by saying the words I'm trying not to think

makes it obvious that I am on the very brink

of wondering where my next move should go

the feelings cannot be denied I think you know

all the good intentions not withstanding now

there is no questions of why only ones of how

god now Im listening to an annoying guitar lead

by Niel Young please stop now I really really plead

my nerves are on edge in case you can't tell

ran out of smoke days ago now Im in hell

and now it seems I have this hairless chest

I'm fumbling around making myself an obnoxious pest

where did I go wrong or has it always been this way

maybe I just didn't notice or refused you might say

to except the limitations of this dreary normal life

should have joined the colonial army and played the fife

just what is my point this thought might have occured

I would explain it to you but I just can't think of the word

pour me another barkeep keep the golden nectar flowing

aw don't tell me that you think I really should be going

I know babe it's time for you to move yourself along

I wanna sing farewell to you but I can't remember the song

dam I sure wish I had me a bowl or two or a joint

I'm so afraid that I have reached the seperation point

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Smitten Drive]

I think this is excellent. Times are hard, and I wish you the best of luck.

[Coyote Poetry]

I never solved any problems with the booze and the drugs. But I would feel better. I like this poem. No easy way to say good bye. I still like the face to face method. E-mail may have a suicide killer waiting in the closet one night to kill you. A excellent poem. You always made me think.
Coyote

[Liza]

amazing flow - these kind of realities are not easy to spread on the page when emotions run heavy

[Doreen]

The rambling thoughts of he who ponders in the dim light of the bar in the wee hours. Disjointed and emotional thoughts mixed with a pint. Nice job.

[Jeff]

Amazing work here my friend. Great rhyme scheme too!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Another amazing write.. :)

[?]

Well Gomer, Hate to tell you this but the frosty ones and the smoke dont help.
it does momentarily, but then when the buzz is over BAM back in your head. Been there, done that, am now. But I would like to say that this is another wonderfully written poem from you. Thanks so much for sharing, cant say I enjoyed reading it, made me much more sad than I was. lol
But thanks for sharing

[Tony]

Carefully colored mundane thoughts.
By saying the words, trying not to think.
Don't worry, Friend. I have some agri-producto...