Echoes

Echoes

the cries for freedom are echoing loud

from each and every voice in this singular crowd

begging to be let go away from the confusion

pulling and tugging this heart needs to fly

everyone wanting a piece of the action

the space reamaining is now only a fraction

release from the heartaches now an illusion

sad faces in the mirror the tears that you cry

no one understands the pressure inside

the choices unclear the crumbling of pride

the soul becoming just one large contusion

and you feel so alone and you're wondering why

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

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The title fits, (knowing where this piece came from)
Very emotive piece, as usual from your sweet little pea pickin heart. lol :)
Confusion, pressure, heartaches, why do we have to have these?
Dont know about you but I would be just fine if I never had them. But I guess thats life, right?
This was emotionally written from your heart and I appreciate that David.

[Coyote Poetry]

When we feel alone and separated. It is bad place to be. I got a lot of things from this poem. The first set of line made me feel the need for freedom. But it is hard to make happen. The middle lines it the emotion when you realize who we are and what we can do. Ending made me question life and the reasons for a soul that got lost. A excellent poem. I need to think when I read your poetry.
Coyote