Flakey Stuff

a hoppin(up tempo) jazz blues tune about your and mine babies kisses

Flakey Stuff

you know that cover over a pie

it hits the apple of your eye

soft and sweet just like your babies kisses

with sugar coating and cinamon

it tastes so good that it's a sin

yeah kinda like your babies kisses

when she holds you oh so tight

you're feeling like dynomite

gotta get me more of my babies kisses

you know that she.....

is so perfect for me

she makes me feel loved and free

we're registered voters

I like riding cycled motors

but not like my babies kisses

we laugh and sing all the time

there's nothing else on my mind

'cept maybe my babies kisses

you know that she.....

is so perfect for me

she makes me feel loved and free

god how I love my babies kisses

ooooooo I want my babies kisses

mmmmm nothing like my babies kisses

Gomer LePoet....

Reviews

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

SWEET THOUGHTS ..

XO JAZZ

[Gomer LePoet]

Thank you so much Jazzy. Sweet as my Baby's baby kisses

[JB Murray]

Gomer... you are one of a kind my friend...

[Gomer LePoet]

Thanks JB. I depreciate that! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poem. I like the feel and happiness in the words. We need to be able to dance for joy when our sweet lover is near. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dupree]

I have to say I adore how you can write a very serious piece that makes me think of the world anew, and then to this the funny adorable poems that make me smile and giggle. Gomer I adore you!

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oh Gomer, this was so fun
awesome rhyming

[Albatross]

Very cute and sweet! I loved this, almost as much as I loved my babies kisses;)
I love how lyrical this piece is, I felt like singing along the whole time.

[Cherrie]

good fun and a good play on words

[.......]

we're registered voters
I like riding cycled motors

LOL!!! These lines were so cute,
This is such wonderful sweet write.
So very creative and nicely written.