I fell outa bed last nite

rap song - falling out of bed?

I fell outa bed last nite

I felt bad last nite

knew something wasn't right

when I turned out the light

then I fell outa bed last nite

I knew something was wrong

I kept humming this song

I heard the sound of a gong

then I fell outa bed last nite

I hit my head

my nose sort of bled

now my nose is all red

when I fell outa bed last nite

I looked up above

did someone give me a shove

think I fell outa love

when I fell outa bed last nite

was this a message from you

did I do something terribly wrong

if I say I'm sorry will it do

that's why I wrote you this song

my eyes were kinda glazy

now my legs or kinda lazy

I think I'm going crazy

since I fell outa bed last nite

I hear my woman bitchin

as I stagger to the kitchen

now my fingers keep a twitchin

dam I fell outa bed last nite

pour some water in a glass

felt a pain in my a*s

is it heart attack or gas

how did I fall outa bed last nite

was it just an illusion

or is there collusion

so much confusion

since I fell outa bed last nite

was this a message from you

did I do something terribly wrong

if I say I'm sorry will it do

that's why I wrote you this song

dam I fell outa bed last nite

how did I fall outa bed last nite

whoa I fell outa bed last nite

that's right I fell outa bed last nite

Gomer LePoet ....

Reviews

[....]

My goodness if falling out of bed makes this kind of write it must have been worth it, this is quite a wonderful write. Don't think so much about falling out of bed the next time work on how you can fall up into bed! Just bein' funny. LIked your rhyme scheme....xo

[madmocha]

My first read of your poetry... probably because (as not a poet) poetry often isn't my first read. This was excellent. Funny in a self-deprecatory way. Did I fall, or was I pushed? That's the intrigue. Excellent poem.

[?]

What humor David. Did you really fall outa bed last nite? lol
This was cute and fun. loved it and the last stanza was perfect for this.

[Judy Ponceby]

LOL. The chagrin and humor you illicit is fantastic :) Well done. Nice rhythm.