I Surrender

dreams of your kisses

I surrender

I wish it would have ended differently

I wish it would have been like the beginning

like a couple of high school kids

we were both so excited

I'm not sure the excitement ever left

it certainly didn't for me I know

but it changed we changed

I surrender all my thoughts

they still are about you

I surrender my lonely heart

it still misses you so bad

I surrender all my tears

they still fall for you

I surrender

Gomer LePoet ....

Author's Note

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HM_PGuSbeo

Reviews

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David,
I watched the video, I can so related to this and understand it. Although it brought such pain and tears to me. Circumstances.
This is such a touching and painful piece of surrender. Sometimes having to give up and surrender (in my case) because of circumstance is the most painful.
Love the way you expressed this

[Lily Mae]

I can feel this painful surrender.. xx you penned these emotions perfectly..x