Pretty Please With Sugar

reaching out - to fill this empty space

Pretty Please with Sugar

I've hit the wall with my thoughts

words will no longer fill my head

now nothing there but doubts

things I have written you never read

you were my magical inspiration

you were the soul of my delight

I need you to be my Leda

I want to be your swan in the moonlight

I miss the fragrance of my Sunflower

I miss my babydoll and all her charms

I beg you pretty please with sugar on it

return to my waiting empty arms

Gomer LePoet ....

Reviews

[Wynona]

Yummy! This is such a yummy poem! Its beauty is in its simplicity and how very accessible it is to readers. Great stuff!

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David,
This speaks of the yearning, the loneliness, emptiness of ones heart, mind, arms, when the other has left. You do know that Sunflowers dont have much fragrance if at all, right? lol ;) Emptiness begging to be filled once again.
I do read everything you write you know. I love reading your work
Love the rhyming

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This is so wonderful, I like this.
Youre so poetic. Nicely expressed and written.