Demons Of Desire

Desires for what we do not have

Demons of Desire

look at that squeeze

my god is she hot

the way she swings those hips

sets my soul on fire

I'm begging you please

give me a shot

to taste those sweet lips

Demons of Desire

check out those wheels

that gorgeous paint

the chrome shinning in the light

the way they conspire

let me see how it feels

see the ladies faint

as I cruise the strip all night

Demons of Desire

fancy place on the beach

now thats the crib

make them all jealous for sure

take me much higher

tell me how far I must reach

how to act so glib

greed and lust not for the pure

Demons of Desire

Gomer LePoet ....

Reviews

[?]

oh now I liked this piece Gomer, "Demons of Desire" oh the desire and temptations can get us everytime.
ummmm you gotta reach thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis far, think maybe you already know how to act glib. lol
Im with Poppy on this one, did not end how expected, but then again you are good at that. I loved it from beginning to the end. Awesome!!!

[Ruth]

I like where this leads love, powerful :) It does not lead where you expect lol But you are a gem for that :) xoxo

[AJ]

I do really like this poem, but I honestly think it would be better if you took out the in-text repetitions of 'demons of desire'. It would still be just as strong. The first verse in particular is awesome. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the desire of this poem. Temptation can lead us to bad and good places. I had to read a few times. Strong statements made the poem a interesting tale. A outstanding poem.
Coyote