My Lonely Heart - Day 4

My Lonely Heart -Day 4

Tuesday

after early day sun

the day turned dreary

stormy and rainy

I tried keeping myself

busy

trying not to think

about the one

who fills my heart

with joy

sometimes with sadness

that's my fault

expecting more

much more

than I should

much more

than I have a right too

I painted somemore

on my room

until it got

too dark

from the storm clouds

looks like

I will need

more paint

I sure need

more sunlight

as the darkness

crept into my room

I found myself

at the familiar place

looking once again

at her pictures

I become

more amazed

everyday that I look

she is so beautiful

you can see the beauty

it is behind those eyes

I get lost

looking into those eyes

trying to read

the message there

sometimes

it seems to say

help me

I am a lost little girl

I have gotten older

but I am still that

little girl

I miss her

I miss her so bad

I wonder if she thinks of me

across the miles

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Corset]

I 'm reading these wonderful words and I'm wondering, does she know you miss her? Does she know how you feel? Perhaps, if this girl knew how you felt you would not be lonely for her? A very nice poem, with a beautiful sentiment.

[Stacey Watts]

This was wonderful. The emotion and thoughts here are very heartfelt. I can't wait to here the poems that you have when you are reunited. I am sure those will be wonderful as well.

[?]

yeah, I too wonder if she reads your work....well expressed thoughts of your lonliness...longing for someone to return to you...love the thoughts ... lonely...love...caring...love the last few lines....I wonder if she thinks of me across the miles...across the lonely miles...Beautiful and heartfelt thoughts Gomer

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Wonder if She reads your work ... .. Sounds like Love .. and Pain ..

Jazz :)