Behind the Door

No one is watching - can she stay - away the hunger for sweetness

Behind the Door

she is there

now behind the door

no one can see her

nobody can know for sure

will she reach

inside the candy jar

will she frohlich

alone in the candy store

giving up those sweets

not all that easy

no one is watching

maybe just a little more

maybe just a simple taste

close her eyes and so enjoy

she is there behind that door

and no one else can know for sure

but in my heart I take that trust

inside of hers I know she must

show the strength to endure

because her word is true and pure

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

I like this it was very well written. Very cute.The words flow smoothly and are sweet. It reminds me of me trying to exhibit will power with a pan of brownies.

[Sandy Beach]

It is a dangerous thing to let a chocoholic loose in a candy store of their choice.
especially if no one is watching. cool read.