This piece comes from a personal experience of conflict, truth-telling, and resilience. The language is simple so everyone—regardless of education or background—can understand the message. It’s not meant to attack, but to reflect and respond with clarity. If you’ve faced threats, misunderstanding, or injustice, may this speak for you too.
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This piece is powerful and fierce like a strong statement wrapped in rhythm. It’s clear, confident, and unshaken. The way you mix personal pain with strength shows real emotional depth. You defend your truth with facts, not just feelings, and that's what makes the message even stronger. The lines about justice, education, and protecting your father’s name hit especially hard, like you're not just speaking for yourself but for something bigger. It’s not just a poem, it’s a stand bold, unapologetic, and full of pride. Amazing work.
Thank you, Ayesha, for taking the time to read and connect so deeply with this piece.
.. read moreThank you, Ayesha, for taking the time to read and connect so deeply with this piece.
This poem comes from a very recent and personal situation, my father passed in 2023, and after his passing, extended relatives used his name to raise funds online. I approached them respectfully, asking for transparency, and in return was met with false accusations and threats.
What they didn’t know is that I had already gathered documented evidence. But this was never just about proof, it was about their integrity, and whether they would own the harm they caused.
Your review means a great deal because you understood the heart behind it. I don’t break--I document, not just for myself, but in defense of truth and legacy.
5 Months Ago
Thank you for sharing such a personal and emotional story. I'm truly sorry for your loss. It’s hea.. read moreThank you for sharing such a personal and emotional story. I'm truly sorry for your loss. It’s heartbreaking that people used your father’s name in such a wrong way after his passing. You showed a lot of strength by asking for the truth calmly, even when they responded unfairly. Yet, you still stood strong and focused on protecting your father's legacy. That sure must've asked for lots of confidence and strength. Your words are powerful, and I’m glad my message could offer you some support. You’re doing the right thing by standing up for truth with dignity. Don't give up and keep fighting for what's right. Don't let the world brainwash you with their sweet lies to make you stop from what you're doing.
5 Months Ago
Appreciate your words, Ayesha. Wishing you well as we both carry forward what matters.
This piece is powerful and fierce like a strong statement wrapped in rhythm. It’s clear, confident, and unshaken. The way you mix personal pain with strength shows real emotional depth. You defend your truth with facts, not just feelings, and that's what makes the message even stronger. The lines about justice, education, and protecting your father’s name hit especially hard, like you're not just speaking for yourself but for something bigger. It’s not just a poem, it’s a stand bold, unapologetic, and full of pride. Amazing work.
Thank you, Ayesha, for taking the time to read and connect so deeply with this piece.
.. read moreThank you, Ayesha, for taking the time to read and connect so deeply with this piece.
This poem comes from a very recent and personal situation, my father passed in 2023, and after his passing, extended relatives used his name to raise funds online. I approached them respectfully, asking for transparency, and in return was met with false accusations and threats.
What they didn’t know is that I had already gathered documented evidence. But this was never just about proof, it was about their integrity, and whether they would own the harm they caused.
Your review means a great deal because you understood the heart behind it. I don’t break--I document, not just for myself, but in defense of truth and legacy.
5 Months Ago
Thank you for sharing such a personal and emotional story. I'm truly sorry for your loss. It’s hea.. read moreThank you for sharing such a personal and emotional story. I'm truly sorry for your loss. It’s heartbreaking that people used your father’s name in such a wrong way after his passing. You showed a lot of strength by asking for the truth calmly, even when they responded unfairly. Yet, you still stood strong and focused on protecting your father's legacy. That sure must've asked for lots of confidence and strength. Your words are powerful, and I’m glad my message could offer you some support. You’re doing the right thing by standing up for truth with dignity. Don't give up and keep fighting for what's right. Don't let the world brainwash you with their sweet lies to make you stop from what you're doing.
5 Months Ago
Appreciate your words, Ayesha. Wishing you well as we both carry forward what matters.
Wow like a powerful slam and rap type poem all in one, rhymed superly wow. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Posted 5 Months Ago
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5 Months Ago
Thank you so much, S.Zaynab! Your words truly lifted me. I poured a lot into the rhythm and message .. read moreThank you so much, S.Zaynab! Your words truly lifted me. I poured a lot into the rhythm and message of this piece—it’s part rap, part real talk, all truth. I’m grateful it resonated with you.
I’d be happy to read your newest work too. I believe in lifting each other’s voices-especially when they’re bold and unapologetic.
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