Dawn of Hope

Wake up to see the day
All so bright and sweet
But all u get is a void and defeat
The day has just begun
How do I feel so broken already?
When will I be able to function without being so needy
But then the void starts to fill
Where is this coming from?
Why does it matter?
When this feeling is getting oh so better
How do I wake up and feel like this everyday?
Where there is no void no pain... just a heart filled joy and no disdain
That day shall come, I am hopeful
Soon and not later
To make me whole, to make me feel, to make me smile like there is nothing greater.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Inner conflict here. I felt it. Mornings for some people can be the lowest part of the day, then as the day progresses it improves. Not everyone wakes up full of the joys of spring. It can be a depressing experience for many. There are many who suffer anxiety and depression who don't look on a new day with uplifting thoughts. Never give up hope though. Situations can change sometimes when you least expect it. Keep writing.

Chris

[Webster]

Thank you Chris for reading my work. Thank you too for the words of optimism. Your reviews make me feel like my words are being heard. It's a warming feeling.