Chapter 1

 

 

I  sigh as I walk into my spacious  room. Furs and rugs litter the floor making it plush as plush and colorful as a rain forests floor . If you look up  on the ceiling in the day You"ll see the most magnifecient blue sky you'll ever see .  If you look at it in the night you'll see a beautiful blue velvet sky with twinkling white beams of light . Golden warm sunlight floods in from large windows. The wind blows softly through it as well and drifts slowly into the room filling it with  a wonderful exotic smell of pomeganate and ripe fresh coaco beans. My world is complete paradise. Its not an island but a peninsula which is vital to my people. Without water we would shrivel up in the sun and die . I stop and turn around to face my to ladies in waiting and grin . Todays the day I say pumping my fist . The small water proof pack on my shoulder slides down my arm jingling the contents inside . Elsa smiled and shook her head " Child, everydays the perfect day to you ," .................

 

 

Author's Note

im not done but tell me what you think

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

thanx again

[Maria]

I like very nice to read

[karmic]

I enjoy how descriptive you are, which is key for a book. I would like to know more of what is going on though, but so far it sounds well written.

[Gandré]

It is so pleasant to read such positive, hopeful romantic text! A dynamic climax message makes this a fantastic read.