Rude Boy

Ughhhh getting my hair done and the woman has inspired me talking about life .

Your so nasty

Lips in a seductive smirk

Fingers lingering 

Thats why you enchant me

When you touch me

The sparks fly

Our lips colllide

The colors burn

My  heart yearns for nothing more

Hair in fist

leg on the  wall

I can't take it all in

Im gonna let you win

You can be the captain

I'm gonna give in

Im not gonna let you get what you want though

So you'll come back in

 

Come here Rude boy " Are you big enough?"

 

Author's Note

lol idk just crude thought of the moment writing

Reviews

[Adora.xo]

Very erotic details, and yet it flowed rather well. I loved it! I think that you could go a lot further with this, not necessarily more erotic, you could elongate the poem and add details. That's just me though, but I definitely love it! Good job!

[Remember Courage]

I love this piece! it is full of details and i can see the scene unraveling in my mind. I love the ending it gave me chills! Well written and well felt.
-Courage