As we haunt these dark hallways.

take my heart wherever you go

my soul is yours just so you know

everytime I see a dove

I will think about your love

together forever and always

even after death we walk down the hallways

hand in hand, side by side

our love will last even after we have died

we will wonder this dark hall

even when these walls fall

our ghosts will stay with one another

our souls will drift, lighter than a feather

I huant these halls, but I'm not alone

I have my love; he's here by my side, standing like a stone

ready to fight our battles together

and for eternity we will be each other's lover

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This is a very strong emotional piece. You can tell that there is devotion here, something that lasts. One might wonder what would force the young lovers down the path however, and hope that they do not have to walk it so quickly. Well done.

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very good poem.
The rhyming was perfect. It has a good flow.

[MZ]

I like this poem, its calming, and really pretty. good job

[Sexy P3nguin]

I really like this poem.
It's very well worded and written. You did a great job
I am officially a fan of your work

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mimi,

Another nice poem of love's devotion. I can see this is truly felt. The strong emotion comes through clearly. Nice job.

Best regards,

Rick

[deeps]

This is a very well written write full of emotion.
It's very powerful write of love. Like it it's beautiful.