Wedding vows.

_____, you are my one true love, the one I want to

 

 spend the rest of my life with. Today, I take you to be

 

 my husband. I promise you that I will be faithful,

 

worthy of your trust, and commendable of your love.

 

I vow to honor you, cherish you, love you, and

 

respect you, for rich or for poor,

 

or till death is at our door.

Author's Note

Alright, so I wrote my friend's wedding vows for him and his soon-to-be-husband, and so he said he really liked them, and that I can keep them and write his own for him. I decided to post them. (I put ____ at the begining because I currently don't have a boyfriend :'[ )

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

I like the ending line, and the way you began it with a blank space actually makes it all the more intriguing.

[Huggy Bear]

You should do other people's vows. It is really good and it shows that you have real depth and a real definition of what love is.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mimi,

This is indeed a very nice wedding vow. Sweet, sincere, and simple. Very well done.

Rick

[Coyote Poetry]

You wrote a beautiful wedding vow.
Coyote

[Cassandra D.]

I'd like to tell you that this was a very nice piece.
And what else is there to say?
Very well done :)