Goodbye world.

You said you wouldn't

You promised you'd stay

Live without you? I know I couldn't

I don't want to listen to what you have to say

Why did you leave

I want you back for good

It's getting harder to breathe

This didn't end the way it should

My heart hurts from the pain you cause

I want to be happy, but I don't know how

You left because I had a few flaws

Why can't you stay for now

I just have one thing left to say

I could have never done this to you

I love you to this day

Well, I suppose that will have to do

My life is slipping away, I wish he never came

I really wish I didn't let you die

I don't think I can ever be the same

And now, I guess this is goodbye...

Author's Note

I was sad last night, I was crying when I wrote this too..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. The pain and loneliness is felt in your words. Separation leave us wishing for a better ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ellen Hammond]

Amazing how a beautiful poem can emerge from sadness and grief. Like a phoenix rising from the ashes your talent is flying higher. A lovely rhyme and flow to this poem perhaps flowing from your tears. Keep writing, you have a gift worth sharing.

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Mimi,

Yes, I can see you crying as you wrote this. This is a bitter-sweet poem. Loved the whole poem.

This is one of your better pieces, and as you are a remarkable young poet, that means this is an amazing piece and congratulations are in order. This is an truly fine write.

My very best regards,

Rick

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a sad poem. It took me by surprise. I didn't expect it to be so honest and candid. I like the straight forward nature in this poem. You simply spoke your mind.

My heart hurts from the pain you cause

I want to be happy, but I don't know how

You left because I had a few flaws

Why can't you stay for now

I really liked that a lot. I hear music when I read this poem.
You are a natural song writer.