something new, something blue?

hey I'm new

There something there
beyond within my stare
deep inside of you

its not a glare
of hatred fair
but of love forever true

Author's Note

something off the top of my head

Reviews

[rielovella]

Nice even though it's short. Keep up the good work!

[jhed]

short but sensible..keep on writing..

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

wow amazing
short but amzing work
:)
Your Friend Demi

[Subjective Sanity]

Very much to the point. I get it. Good stuff!

[The Wave]

love it! :)
short but sweet

pretty good for "off the top of your head"