Mother's love..

Mother is irreplaceable..lv uh mommy:)

Holding my hands you taught me to live,
In the world of faces Ur the first I believe..
Even at 70 u laugh at my lame humour,
Just not to let me feel like a looser..
Nothing last forever everything's mortal,
Only the mother's affection in the whole universe is unconditional..

Author's Note

Please give honest review so I can improve my writing..
Thnk u
Best wishes:)

Reviews

[Eiram]

Yep, Very unconditional when she love,and mother's are the best gift from god, not only our mother but our father's too.

[Govind singh]

Yes true words...thank you so much:)

[boygene borice]

Mothers are the best beings in the world. Good writing my friend :)

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch dude...I appreciate Ur comment:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and wonderful poem for your mother. Thank you Govind for sharing the amazing poetry for your dear mother.
Coyote

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch sir... I appreciate Ur comment:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[sette]

a fitting poem for your mother please refrain from abbreviated yous please

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch..:)