Tuned In

I would like to know
what your heartbeat sounds like
as you fall asleep
To tune my inhalations
to your breaths
and maybe feel what it must be like
to be so completely yours

Reviews

[Broken Soul]

I really like this. Short, sweet, and many feelings.

[Relic]

Hmm? what happened to my comment? I know I left one? Hmm?

[Green]

I think that was the other site :)

[Relic]

Ahh, perhaps you're right. Thanks, I thought I was losing it. :)

[K. Louis]

The idea of matching breath and heartbeat feels very intimate. The short lines and simple words make the feeling stronger. It's quiet, sweet, and full of emotion.

[carl]

such a personally intimate and deeply romantic line - I also read The Winds, Codes, and I Always Knew, each is a very fine piece of work - enjoyed your work greatly - carl