A Vast Ocean

A Vast Ocean

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 4/11/15 sereenaoutloud challenged me to write something, it had to be about water so here it is haha.

"
Your heart
Is like a vast ocean.
At the shoreline
The waves are usually calm.
..Tamed..
But swim further out
Take a dive
And see
The untamed waters; a raging
Deep sea
(End)

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet


Author's Note

GreenEyedPoet
Only posting it cause Sereena wanted me too haha.

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a valid and thoughtful insight.

Posted 10 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
love is like a ocean,some times tame some times not

Posted 10 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

10 Years Ago

Very true!
You sucked me in with the ocean that beckons like love and how deep is love? How long is a piece of string!? A great write and challenged you arose from the deep with many colours. Lovely!GEP

Posted 10 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

10 Years Ago

Aww thanks Andrew! Glad you liked it! :)

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