A Creature Like Me.

First poem I ever wrote. 8th Grade.

Down The Dark Dreary Walls
That Reflect A Shadow Of Light,
Lies A Painting So Deadly,
Yet Captivating My Site

In The Painting I See,
A Creature Like Me,
Looking So Free,
Intimidating Me.

The Evil In Her Eyes,
And The Sorrow In Her Mind
This Person Could Only Be
Me.

Shocked And Disturbed,
I Ran From The Painting
Passing Each Room,
The Fear Still Remaining
I Thought I Was Safe,
But To My Surprise
The Tears Were Still Falling
Down From My Eyes

Through The Fear I See,
A Creature Like Me,
Looking So Free,
Intimidating Me

I Gasped...

Author's Note

I don't think its finished yet...seems unfinished...I'll finish it one day...

Reviews

[Moflo]

I liked this idea a whole lot, I think you brought it together nicely. Great concept, and great rhymes. Good to see you back around too!

[Jim Parson]

For a first effort, that's pretty amazing! Most write for years before reaching this depth!