Silent Poem

When i am standing in your silence, i feel alive
Your gentle vibration, resonates inside
Impressing my crown and my third eye
My throat held silent, and my heart tried
To feel all that you are.
 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Ah, it is nice when you can find a person that even makes the silent moments comfortable and wonderful. Nicely written!

[lori c]

this is beautiful... like everyone else, i love the reference to the 'third eye', that which sees the truth. i have someone in my life that this poem makes me think of -- so this is definitely going into my library.

[Bud]

Excellent! Love the line "Impressing my crown and my third eye". Silence can be bliss for the inner mind.
Powerful. Will put this in my favorites.

[Ralphy]

Very powerful poem, I like how you instilled the Third eye. Pondering what its like to stand in someone elses silience. Great write

[poetic soul]

the best things are felt only in the presence of silence.......amazing....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Platypus]

I think some people may not understand what this poem is really about. Very clever. ;)

[Victoria Harlequin]

Silence is "golden", as is this poem.
Great write!

[Natasha]

Silence is a wondrous thing as it curiosity.

It is simple and to the point.
I enjoyed this poem very much.