Universal Mind

Everyday I thank the Universal Mind

Answers to every question that I ask

Even though the words are hard to find

The impressions on my heart will last

Reviews

[Gone]

Awesome. So much in so few lines. This speaks to me of my own relationship with the one who I know as Father and as God. I find the term Universal Mind a bit impersonal for a being that desires a close relationship with his creation (also based on my own understanding of 'His' nature). delightful poem and tidily rhymed

[Karina Longo]

I love it how you can capture the feelings of your poem even though you have this bold, short-style of writing. It's no different with this one. Lovely.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

clear and concise..."I find the term Universal Mind a bit impersonal for a being that desires a close relationship with his creation" too :) great job though

[Mauricio Montoya]

wow! this is awesome because in such a short piece it means a lot. to me it's God and when I pray for the answer to many of my question it never comes back in words.
Excellent write

[OT]

a nice expression of thoughts here!! very well done! it's pretty hard to get much meaning into so few lines but you've done it here! nice!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this .. i wish i could write just four lines that say so very much.
Beautiful thought.

Chloe

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Ah...now this is a gem...a thought seldom found...except for here on Writerscafe...not so seldom...short, sweet, simple = wonderful :)

[EmpressPoetess]

This is a wonderful expression of of thoughts on life and existence. Well done!

[Liza]

appreciation for life is the ultimate feeling of gratitude and of feeling alive...