===THE BLADE OF A KNIFE===

Bloody spatters in rainbow tatters, bloodied blade.
Life is taken as time is forsaken, bloodied blade.
A scream goes out it echoes loud, bloodied blade.
Death takes the victim as is life's system, bloodied blade.
Everything is gone, she once was so strong, bloodied blade.

Of couse she killed him what choice did she have,
Far off a disobedient and impetuous lad.

All is lost when we resort to violence.

Killed in his prime at the height of his life, bloodied blade.
No more breathing his chest was heaving, bloodied blade.
In and out as human life takes its toll, bloodied blade.
Fear is the cost of one sad mortal soul, bloodied blade.
Everything is gone, the story is over, bloodied blade.

Author's Note

Acrostic dealing with knife violence. My second real attempt at an acrostic poem.

Reviews

[K. Payne]

Very nice. I like the repetition of "bloodied blade". It really makes the reader understand and you emphasize the violence and what can happen with that repetition.