Prologue

I know its short - but, please, bear with me. I can never write really long prolugues. -.-

          Prologue

   I was only a little girl when it happened.

   Many of the memories from that day are clouded over, nearly impossible to access. Whenever I try to catch only a glimpse of it, it’s only a few seconds before the sound of my mother’s shrill screams and my father’s yell to  ‘get Eldora out’ fill my head, before they’re both sharply cut short with a sick snapping sound and a growl.

   But, the most potent memory of them all, the most horrible, morbid memory, is the both of seeing both my parents laying motionless son the floor, before a huge, pitch-black creature savagely tore them apart and lunged for me.

Author's Note

... yes yes, i KNOW its extremely short. And its not the best prologue in the world. xD
but, as usual. Please ignore any typos, rude or mean comments wil lbe ignored, and constructive critism is appreciated. =) Thanks!

Reviews

[Dante Yurei]

Well, like you said it's very short. You should try to be more explicit on the details, try to hook the reader from the beginning. I think it has potential and that you could exploit it, especially the last paragraph, that was very good and I liked it; builds up a little suspense. It seems interesting though!