Blank Canvas

A soul that's out of this world

I could admire you forever. 

You're like a blank canvas, desperate to find some colors in the world that might light up your life. 

But there's not even a color that could describe your depth. 

Your soul is out of this world, an endless imagination that can't be trapped in this monotonous and grey world.

Reviews

[PhoenixDown]

You execute "fully" - pouring until the last drop has dripped. This makes reading your work quite fulfilling; satisfying to read. For a shorter piece - this is perfect. A job well done. You seem to have a fine eye.

I like the title as well. I have a piece with the same title.

[Giulia King]

I have to read your piece! Thank you so much P

[Jamey]

This is truly stunning. The canvas idea is perfect for this

[Giulia King]

The canvas idea is a bit different but perfect :) Thank you!

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes one is the canvas waiting for that brush!! Lovely write Gullia

[Giulia King]

So true! Thank you so much!

[Valentine]

Most people are a blank canvas waiting for life to paint their history. Valentine

[Giulia King]

Exactly :)

[Valentine]

I keep return to this write. I painted before I lost my husband, sold all equipment before moving north. I love painting more than writing. Maybe God is trying to tell me something. Kathie

[Giulia King]

I love that you are returning to something that's maybe calling for you? Start doing the things you love, Kathie! Maybe He is trying to tell you something..

[Wondering Mind]

Now, if the blank canvas were white; it could be the deepest of colours- a fusion of all colours- for those who see beyond and within.

There;s a feel of sufism to your admiration of this mind.

[Giulia King]

"Now, if the blank canvas were white; it could be the deepest of colours- a fusion of all colours- for those who see beyond and within."
I absolutely love it!

[Wondering Mind]

;) I'm glad you did. I loved reading the poem

[aLittlePain]

There is a true musicality to this! Melodic with precise sense of meter with you well crafted words.
The gentle overtone of romanticism amplified by infinity. A soul connection is more than anyone can understand. You've captured that well. Gorgeous poetry. Ray xo

[Giulia King]

A million thanks Ray!

[Robert Haigh]

An expressive and poetic piece. Nicely penned!

[Giulia King]

That means a lot! Thank you!

[Gray]

To recognize the depth of someone else like this is a reflection of your own caring soul.

[Giulia King]

I love this!!

[Winslow Des Totes]

I like this piece; it's strong and reverberating in diction but gentle and sweet in tone. It feels very feminine and that is actually refreshing with the context as most of the woman I encounter are both self deprecating and negative in tone but this was different. Overall well done!

T.W.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me! :)

[Winslow Des Totes]

Any time ;)