Beauty Haiku

For Amanda.

You are what the blind

imagine when they are told

what beauty looks like.

Reviews

[Brad]

i used to loathe Haiku, both writing and reading them...i thought it brought on too many "rules" to really feel what the author was trying to convey...but you...you changed my mind around with this...this was awesome...i never knew how well a haiku could flow...bravo

[Alicante lullaby]

to your Haiku
''you are what theblind
Imagine when they are told
what beauty looks like''

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe these words would impress a woman. I like this poem. Said it all in 14 words. That is amazing. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[wolfshrew]

Thats such a beautiful cluster of important words

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

cool poem love it

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, that was really awesome. It fit perfectly :)

M.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Standing ovation. Bravo! bravo.

[Michael X]

Wowe!.. keep it up, if this is an original idea, which i have no doubt you thought of this as an original idea, simply awsome job regardless if its not a true haiku, it doesnt matter, i think the stability of the tone is awsome, i think this poem would be even more effective, if you didnt call it a haiku. know what i mean?

[aftervision]

standing up and snapping over my head -- perfect

[M.a. Benjamin]

Short and sweet. Well done.

[Katie L]

i like it.