LoveSet

As summer sun

was so

our love--

warm

and ever

bright,

until you welcomed

darkness--

eating

every ounce

of light

Reviews

[Patricia]

I like that it is kind of simple but unique at the same time. Nice poem from the heart

[guy drori]

Thank you ... glad you liked it

[Veronique]

You write beautifully my friend...I enjoy reading your hearts words .

[guy drori]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Veronique]

You're very welcome darlin'...:)

[MsJewel]

Bittersweet and beautiful words written from the heart.

Julie

[guy drori]

Thank you Julie :)

[sereenaoutloud]

I agree with Anto, fabulous title for this beautiful but sad write!

[guy drori]

Thank you ! :)

[ANTO]

I love anyone who isnt afraid to create new words that make sense and conjure more than the sum pf their parts. A 'Loveset' is a word i will never forget Guy.
Pure inventive class.
A top favourite of mines my friend.

[guy drori]

Thank you so much for your kind words ! I actually never paid much attention to the word 'LoveSet.' I don't even remember how I thought of it, but you surely gave me something to look at now :)

[ANTO]

Loveset - a Lovers Sunset - right up my street - thanks Guy