It Simply Hurts

It hurts!

--It just hurts--like knives

missing you so much

without intending to call you

or even send a one word message,

because hearing your voice

or reading your words

will hurt even more.

 

You do not even know,

yet as I am just one in a billion

within your vast universe

you are so vast

within my empty world.

 

You do not even know,

yet as you think of me

as a simple friend

you are simply the best friend

I have.

 

It hurts.

Reviews

[Curly Grace]

Such a quiet, honest ache in these lines. You’ve captured the kind of hurt that whispers rather than shouts.

[Muhammad]

"You do not even know,
yet as I am just one in a billion
within your vast universe
you are so vast
within my empty world."

This was the gut punch. Heart wrenching, yet wonderful read.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

you write with heart, this is tugging...

[Jade]

Aw, such a heartfilled emotional read, This touched me

[guy drori]

I'm really glad to hear Brandie . . . thanks for reading :)