Why?

The rain poured down as I watched ur coffin disappear

my tears were about to come down as I hit the ground.

 

Y did the angels come an take u away?

y did the angels come an take the one I love?

 

The drum roll begin as I heard the preacher say,

Let's bow our heads an pray

I heard the gun shot one last time 

as I broke down an cried.

 

Y did the angels come an take u away?

y did the angels come an take the one I love?

 

Where did I go wrong or what did I do wrong?

I loved her with all my heart but now she's gone 

 

~Pedro Klasssen

Author's Note

This is actually a song that a friend of mine wrote. I really liked it when he sent it to me an asked if I could post it an he said he was fine with it so enjoy!:) give your opinion in a review an I'll let him know what you think. He now has his own account tho:)

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I really like this piece. I like the fact that the sadness and loss that is felt is actually dealt with in a very meaningful and heartfelt way...! Very good

[Yina]

Thanks for the comment:)

[realmwriter]

Your welcome...!

[Jessi Loewen]

So beautiful!!!

[Yina]

This is actually not my writing, in case you hadnt noticed:P It's Ammie's brother's:) I love it tho:) Thanks for the comment:)

[Coffee Vampier]

I this is a very sad write but is have heart truth and meaning to it. , lovely but sad write :)

[AndyJCash]

I love the improper English used in this like "Y" and "u", makes it personal and yet gives it a modern day context. Just shows, it doesn't matter how someone expresses sadness, there is still emotion in the words.

[.......]

This is such a sad write,
but so powerfully written.

[akapr17other]

This is so sad. It's so hard to lose someone you love, and that loneliness is expressed here. Good work.

[Queen of Fantasy]

I actually really like it! It has the message that alot of peoplpe can relate to and would be loved my many!

[Awkward]

very sad song, what genre of music was this meant for?

[dreaming dame]

Oh,my, WOW!!!! I loved it, I almost started crying!!!