The Feeling

          The sweat running down your back

          The heavy breathing

          The nervousness clenching your guts

          The coach yelling

          The crowd cheering

 

          All the amazing feelings and sounds of....

               

                    BASEBALL!!

Author's Note

I really need a better title! Ideas?? Please?

Reviews

[JanieB]

You have encaptured your feeling s very well in your short poem.
A title? I agree, I think the title "The Feeling" doesn't do it justice. Perhaps..just "Baseball" as you feel so strongly about it?

[AndyJCash]

Reminds me when I used to play baseball when I was younger...wish it was bigger in England.

[realmwriter]

Tile: Play On!!! and I like it short and sweet and to the point! Perfect!!!

[dreaming dame]

I feel with you all the way! :) But too bad you didn't mention burning the dudes with good hits or making great plays. :) Love it! :)

[DontBlink158]

Love playing baseball, love the poem, hmmmmm i think you did a GREAT job!!!!! but sorry i suck at titles.... Great job!!

[Poe Redd]

Wow. Now I can say I know what it's like to play baseball. haha! you can't make me play now! Great poem, lol!

[SamBug]

Describes baseball.
Good job

[Karli]

LOVE. Perfect description of baseball:)

[stars are far]

nice one :)