Cousin Dear

For my dear cousin whose account name on here is dreaming dame:) Check her out;)

This is for my cousin near

That to me is very dear

 

You love to play baseball

An totally give your all

 

Your blue eyes and long hair

With your skin and face so fair

 

Your taste in all these boys

Gives even ME some joys

 

Your heart is full of caring

An always ready for sharing

Author's Note

I'm not done with this quite yet. I'm gonna add more yet

Reviews

[ImagineItAll]

I like this so far. Keep going with it!

[Krystal Nicole]

Great job so far and the rhyming is terrefic!!

[realmwriter]

Great start so far, cant wait to read what you add...!

[stars are far]

this is so sweeeeeeeeeet ..
i liked this a lot :)

[roy mccarthy]

it's cute!

[Caitlynxoxo]

I like it! It's always ncie to read a poem about someone close to the author, because you can tell there's truth behind the strong words, as evident here :) Awesome job! Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[AndyJCash]

That's gutsy: I couldn't write a poem like that about someone I know and you've done a good job :)

[DontBlink158]

Great job!!! its really sweet and caring, i love it!!!!!!

[dreaming dame]

Schtink Yina, :)I don't know what to say. The structure of this poem is very nice. :) So's the words. Love you soooo much. :)

[Kiri Nells]

It's so simple, it's touching. Great work, Yina!