Self Portrait

For WC... my first piece composed entirely on WC.

Dark, coiled locks cascade down

passing broad shoulders;

framing a chocolate brown face

with high cheek bones,

and a slender button nose.

Full lips that love to kiss

dreams and high hopes.

The strongest feature

are those eyes,

strangely, they hold within them

strength and weariness.

They've seen too much, but

still they refuse to shut.

They paint such a tragically,

beautiful portrait...

that I am glad to call my own.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. A special thanks to Angi for extending this exercise to me.

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

You have painted a self-portrait that suggests your inner self by the things you say about your physical characteristics. That is not easily done and you did it very well. Your inner strength in the face of pain and tragedy shines through along with your readiness to love. Excellent poetry!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so very much for those words. You have captured the essence of this piece firmly!

[Joyce S. Greene]

You're very welcome. I enjoy reading your very fine poetry

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It is very mutual, Joyce.

[Renée]

what can I say..but Extremely Well Done !! and leave a ( :

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Renee it means a lot to me!

[Renée]

I admire that you are able to write such a telling piece about yourself... not just external, but I think you captured the internal .. at least from what I have read of your poetry in general.. it is not easy to do... Bravo P H !

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I appreciate that beyond words. You have humbled my pen hand! Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You have described yourself with precise appreciation and confidence. Good luck in the contest...:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thanks dear friend... its more of a writing exercise for me, I dare not attempt to contend with the great writers whom I'm at liberty to sit among. Your sincere wishes of luck are more than appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Sensual, endearing, and strong, PH.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, your words are appreciated and humbling.

[Lydia Shutter]

Wonderful introspection. Although you do not have your full face in your profile photo, I can picture it now. Splendid imagery. I liked this a lot. Lydi*

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Lydia you reviews are always humbling. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Deepak Janardhan]

Prompt, simple, and gently pleasant. Keep up the good work.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I will try my best to. I appreciate you reading/reviewing my work, I will be sure to reciprocate the gesture.

[Dye]

What a great self portrait. I feel as though I can not only see you but I have a glimpse into who you are. For your eyes that have seen to much but refuse to shut, to always have to keep your eyes open and your lips that love to kiss-- so sweet at the same time.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Dye your words are sincere and I appreciate that greatly.

[Frieda P]

Oooh those eyes, knew you'd have pensive eyes Travis...love this glimpse into your soul, excellent!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Frieda you always seem to make these hands smile.

[Frieda P]

Wooo, now you're just teasing me ;-) My pleasure.....

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Wouldn't dream of teasing you. ;)

[Frieda P]

You're a bad bad boy Travis ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

My chest says, Hero... my back says, Villain. Just a lil hint. haha

[Frieda P]

So women should catch your flip side first and beware eh? hahah

[SyberRose]

Nice to read your portrait Travis...they are fun to write...this was great...nicely penned as always...Enjoyed reading...Rose:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so much for reading it, Rose.

[Stella Armour]

you bring out my artistic streak ph... your portrait would have such beautiful features and your eyes would be far away and sad.What a lovely image i have of you..

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I am flattered on multiple levels, thank you!

[Stella Armour]

you are very welcome....

[MoriartyMesa]

My thoughts tend to lean to the idle rather than the prayer,


like it.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thanks... I appreciate the review.