Snow Envy

Insomnia driven Haiku

Winter's diamonds flew
Settled in crystalline bliss
Peace I wish I knew

Author's Note

For Pryde. I hope my shot measures up... here's my product from the seed you planted. Big thanks to you. ;) thank you all for reading.

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

It really is beautiful. Love the title and the imagery. The part I enjoyed the most was that contemplative piece at the end.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, you always leave me humbled and so very glad to have shared my work with you.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write...Packing power...:).............

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thanks, dear friend.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)........................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very appropriate and descriptive poem that conveys such atmosphere in few words. Excellent!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, John. I appreciate your great review and visit.

[Frieda P]

This is pristine Travis, I love the idea of snow as heaven's diamonds. Peace, yes, would be so nice...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

That it would be. This insomnia has been eating away at me. Your thoughts reward me greatly... now I feel like I've at least made something of it. Lol

[Frieda P]

Ugh, insomnia...I hear you, that's the only good thing that comes out of it, sometimes the creative juices flow, doesn't make up for feeling like shyte though haha

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

That's the truth... You see I had to edit the piece. Insomnia had me believing I used "winter" originally. Haha

[Frieda P]

Ha delirium has set in, both worked!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

True... I actually like the latter a bit more, but needed the former to keep to the traditional rules of a Haiku. And you know how much I hate rules. Haha

[Frieda P]

There's rules in joisey, who knew? Lol

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Yup, but we break em' anyway! That's why I hate them now. Haha