Without You

Uhhm this is the first poem I ever wrote for the first guy I ever really loved...Alex...he wrote me a poem so I tried writing one back....and I just kept going and I am where I am today...but yeh this is the first one ever :] hope ya like it!

Without you close, without you near,
Without your smile, without your tears,
I quietly ask myself,
"Who would I be without you here?"
Without your touch, without your kiss,
Without you my love, there remains no bliss.
I stare into your silver eyes,
The only thing keeping me alive,
This bubbly feeling I cannot hide.
Ever so gently I touch your face,
Knowing perfectly well I'm in my place.
I can't help but wonder as I bite my lip,
Please tell me my dear,
Who would you be without me here?
~Rachel B. Spiers~

Author's Note

Yeh same as the rest....tell me what you think and don't care about mistakes.