How I Feel

For multiple people...my father mainly...

Why does everyone think everything I say is a lie?
They don't even consider my feelings on the inside.
They judge me by everything I say and do,
I think I'm the one that should be asking if they're telling the truth.
I don't know what they think I have to hide,
But if you ask me, having to know every little thing isn't right.
I deserve my privacy, if you got all yours taken away,
You would see, and for once, JUST LET ME BE.
You make my life miserable everyday,
No matter what I do, it's wrong in every way.
I don't think I can take take all this anymore,
You have no idea how close I am to walking out the door.
You say I have everything and I'm a spoiled little brat,
If that's so true, where's everything at?
No one knows exactly what I feel,
Sometimes it hurts so much it's just nothing but surreal.
I wish maybe I could make you a deal,
Just stop saying and acting like you know how I feel.

~Rachel B. Spiers~

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Another well expressed writing of how you feel, with such strong emotions. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Rachel DeHart]

"I don't think I can take take all this anymore,
You have no idea how close I am to walking out the door."

This is a beautiful poem, it has a lot of feeling behind it, and you show it beautifully.
You've written a poem that is very easy to relate to, good job! Keep writing!

[CLUTZ]

privacy is important but you don't always get it. and sometimes people who you think should understand you don't but pretend like they know how you feel and know what's best. i've been called a spoiled brat since i was little because i always got stuff but the thing is i didn't want any of it i just wanted someone to love me and talk to me. very good. everyone can relate to this at some point in time.