Car Loop..."Action!"

I am parked by my curb

waiting for the action

I never try to go first

the mini-vans will beat me down

There is only one lane

in front of the school

two cars will fit,barely

I sit and I wait

it will get good soon

The first few cars are here

but now is closing time

they are coming all in one line

car loop..."Action!"

I think in my head "Action!"

two lines have now formed

they have cut each other off

a third car squeezes in

a mini-van blocks two cars in

it has placed itself just right 

in front of two cars

so no more can even get in

now it is starting to back up

I stand my ground at my curb

the cars behind me know I will not move

around me squeels another mini-van

it brakes quickly in back of the line

here goes another one 

it is determined to be first

a small car it tries to squeeze in

but wait no...a s.u.v. has pulled a block

now none of them can move

but more are still coming

steering wheels are being smacked

frustration is in the air

and all I can think is

car loop..."Action!"

closing time has come

my daughter climbs in easily

I pull away from my curb

they are all locked in a hateful mess

yelling,screaming 

every night after practice this happens

and every day their children go to school

and push and shove

get detention

then get grounded for their behavior

and all I can think is

car loop..."Action!"
as I wait patiently by my curb

Author's Note

this truly happens every night every practice I have been doing this
it truly is great to watch,slowly*)

Reviews

[Just Kim]

oh wow, too cute, enjoyed

[Holly Mason]

thank you ...much truly