Just A Little Hung Up On You

Trying to get over someone

The advice told me to choose

All the things I dislike about you,

But for every flaw, I think of two more

To fall in love.

So thanks for that. Dickhead.

Reviews

[A.L.]

I love how this poem is so short yet tells so much. Takes talent to leave the audience with an understanding of an entire story with merely five lines. Kudos.

[Lady Pearl]

dickhead in deed! short and straight to the point and im sure everyone can relate to this. definitely a fav. I got writers block and wanted to see what other writes have. this the first I started to read and it's more or so what im trying to write about. now i dont have to that message is out there.

love this

[M. George]

Aw, thank you! I can sympathise with the writers' block. Definitely do your own version, even if you want to express a similar thing :)

[anon]

I understand this feeling so much. I liked it :)

[Andrew M Parker]

Before I began to read it I just saw dickhead and thought, 'This'll be good.' It was good. Painfully relatable. I like it *awkward thumbs up*