Do You?

This is about a boy/girl best friend relationship

You've been there all along.

You've seen me at my darkest times,

You've seen me at my happiest times.

I've seen you with her,

hugging, kissing and holding hands,

like you're in love.

It makes my heart hurt when I see you two,

I've never felt this way before. 

Like my world is falling down around me.

The truth is,

I love you.

Now, the only question is,

Do you love me?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Maya Jane]

This poem has some major cuteness factors in it. This could work for all types of relationships. Lesbians, gay, and heterosexual. This poem runs very smoothly and it's simple but has a strong message to it.

[Linds]

I like this poem. It's such a simple but relatable one. Good job.

[paradise]

Been there Done that was in the exact same position it really sucks. But this poem was a great way to show whats going on i really liked how you wrote it it flowed really well

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Been there, know these feelings,
This is well written enjoyed reading this.

[Luke Ritta]

nice poem....It ran very smoothly...liked this alot.

[Crystal Marie Rome]

Awesome! This poem is very sweet and I like the way you ended it with a question. Do your best! =)