Bare Feet

Well, it was inspired by bare feet!

Bare Feet

 

Bare feet are good

To connect to earth

To squelch in the mud

To dance in lace

To be yourself

 

Bare feet are good

To use a fork

To skip

To jump

To live

 

Bare feet are good

To draw in the sand

To kick up a fuss

To leap in the waves

To touch time

 

Bare feet are good

 

Author's Note

The word feet has started to look strange to me, I've written it more than twelve times now (on paper, typing)

Reviews

[Sapphire Dreams]

I agree, the repetition worked well, although as we agreed earlier it doesn't always.. it does here:)

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Wow now that is a beautiful poem! I like how you used 'bare feet are good' as a repetition. It worked great! I love this.