No more...

Dreams crushed

heart shatters

words rushed

nothing matters

 

numbed feeling

cold sensation

mind reeling

dark desolation

 

faked smiles

stumbling haze

fraudulent wiles

lambryth's maze

 

chilling night

bloodied floor

no fight

NO MORE...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is one of the most moving and powerful posts I've read in the Cafe. It's brief but, you've painted a tragic picture with such strong colourful words that there's no doubt that's it's sincerely felt.

[Michael X]

my, what a brilliant rendering of flow and powerfulmeaning that speak in many directions what it means
to suffer at the hands of abuse itself, and to regain what bit of understand is left when all has been
taken away. you have an amazing ability to capture the essense of the moment and make time stand still
at the same time create a riveting image in motion, this is dire and amazing, loved the skill

[Poeticpiers]

one way to end arguments.Terse verse but powerful in delivery