Tranquil Turmoil

Tranquil Turmoil

A Poem by Hannah

The waves are dancing against the shore

Your heart is fluttering in your chest

The gun is sitting in your hands

 

The waves are hitting against the rocks

Your heart is beating in your chest

The gun is screaming in your hands

 

The waves are pounding against the rocks

Your heart is faltering in your chest

The gun is knocked out of your hands

 

The waves are calm

Your heart no longer beats

The gun sighs beside you're bloodoaked hands

© 2010 Hannah


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Added on July 17, 2010
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I love to write. I know my submissions need a lot of work but that doesen't mean I will stop doing what I love. Writing has been a release for me for a long time now. I understand if you don't like.. more..