Look Away

I fear something most people love.

I look away when it stares.

I avoid it always.

I try to hold my shriek when my it’s gaze falls upon mine.

When it stares I weep.

I weep because,

The thing I fear is myself.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Annie N.]

very freaky feeling given here! imagine the truest form of hate. you hav, its hating yourself. the very thought scares me. thanks for sharing!

[nono]

I like it. It's something different. But i hate looking in the mirror it makes me feel really preppy. So very nice job. I like how you said
"When it stares I weep."
It gives a sense of sadness, being frightened, and somewhat loneliness.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

an intricate reflection~ the format sets the anticipation for the last line~ well expressed perception~