Flower

A really old love note

Please okay, I don’t want to wish on a star for you anymore. I don’t want to look at you giggle and blush as I flirt with you and hope that one day you break her heart so you can be with me. I wont feel accomplished. There wont be gratitude. There wont be victory. Just I hurt you to keep my own heart together. To keep my own lust at level. You’re the flower of my life but your poison pollen is stuck in me like an allergic nose. This isn’t what I wanted for me and this isn’t what I wanted for you. I wont pick you. I’ll look from afar. I’ll appreciate the beauty that is you and the beauty that so naturally flows from your fingertips as you sit on a piano bench. I’ll observe with a tear on my cheek that shouts i’m torn for your composure but you don’t know that because it’s a scream that only echoes from inside of me and the wave lengths fill my mind to an unwanted level. But that’s okay sweet flower I wish was mine. You stay in the soil. I don’t need to pick you, i’m okay and when i’m not ill play pretend.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Your words are like flowers here....The things i loved about this story:1)there is a beautiful unconditional love flowing in the lines of this story 2)the words used here are quite beautiful 3)sadness and sacrifice both are presented with simplicity 4)a beautiful love letter.....Superb one....Example of harmless unconditional love....

[Hannah]

Thank you very much, your compliments mean a lot (: Although, this is old and not as good as my other work. You should check out my newer stuff!

[anonymousprankt]

very well picturized for a girl who has a high level of pure thoughts, that fell guilty for what she had done indirectly and what she doing directly. mind blowing poem......

[Hannah]

Thank you very much, this is an old one, have you read my other work?