Puzzle Pieces

Romeo and Juliet

We fit together perfectly,

but we come from different sets

I tremble at your touch,

yet we drift further apart

Reviews

[richieb]

Truthful words. Anticipation, hopeful longing, pain always looming in the background. These are the images your beautiful words reveal to me.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Hannah]

Thanks you richie. I'm sorry it took so long for me to respond. This poem is on my old account, and i don't make it a point to check it very often. Thank you for your review.

[matrixmark]

This is really good...packs some punch rings so true to those who want to be with someone but obstacles lay in the way and are too great to overcome.

Kudos to you.

Mark.

[Hannah]

Thank you, Mark. I'm glad it feels true.

[Jacob Clifford]

Touching words. Is there any greater pain than not being with the one you love? It's good to see another piece from you--it's been quite a while.

[Hannah]

Thanks, Clifford. It has been a while.

[Pete]

They were star-crossed and the pieces just didn't fit - it wasn't meant to be, so it can't be forced.

[Hannah]

Exactly right. Thank you for reading.

[wordman]

a true love that was never in the cards,lovely write

[Hannah]

That's exactly what I was going for. Thank you, wordman.