I Have a Problem.

6.16.2020

I Have a Problem.
A Need.
To Make.
I Can't Control It.
And I Can't Control
What I Make.
And Who Sees It
And How it Makes
Them Feel.
A Creative Victim.
Mentally
Distant from Humanity,
Breathing
a Breath in People.

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

>A Need.
To Make

Your line breaks make the poem a bit more awkward to read. While I like the concept of fear of judgement it does not really fully display the reason behind the speaker's fears and how the speaker reacts to those fears. I would have liked a more detailed poem as I feel like your are constricting yourself a bit when writting this as you want it to look aesthetically appealing while sacrificing your idea.